Final overall claim for the presentation

So here was the final overall claim for my presentation:

We should recognize eclectic creative domains, including Star Wars, horror movies, hip hop aesthetics, black studies, and father-son experiences, in order to pinpoint what assisted in making Colson Whitehead, Kevin Young, Aaron McGruder, and Ta-Nehisi Coates outlier black writers.

Here's the initial draft and later draft of my overall claim.

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• A Golden Age of Inspiration for Black Men Writers, 1977 - 1997